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Dear Test Takers, 

We learn the proven strategies foe every question type in the writing module. These top tips make you to score well in your IELTS Writing test as well as increase your overall scores!

IELTS Essays!

Sample Essays of Band 9!

International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. Which point of view do you agree with?

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In the current world, international marketing is certainly believed as an introducing an illegal aspect into the economy of the host country. However, it is often considered by some that such type of marketing is significant for the economic form of knowledge as well as exchanging diverse culture, languages and customs. In my opinion, I strongly believe that international marketing promotes globalization by opening new opportunities in future business and thus improve economic growth. 

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International marketing has several advantages. Firstly, enhancing economic growth of the country would often be promoted by global marketing. In other words, it certainly opens new doors for future business. For instance, recent studies show that there should certainly a considerable growth in the field of international trade in electronic gadgets from countries such as Russia and China. In addition, International Marketing often explores inner talent of citizens across the globe. 

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Moreover, improving the brand reputation of the product would certainly have another plus point of the international business because product brands often gain reputation and popularity across the world. Multinational banks often attained reputation in the current scenario. Hence, local brands of the country would probably become familiar across the world by international marketing. 

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Furthermore, spreading of ideas, customs, tradition and language would often possible by global trade, thus spreading diverse culture throughout the world. World food products in popular supermarkets such as Tesco and Asda would often show an example of global business networks, therefore, introducing global food into the country's local trade market. 

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In conclusion, international marketing should be promoted through the world for improving economic knowledge as well promoting different culture worldwide. Such promotion of international marketing should often possible without interrupting nation own local culture and trade by making awareness among citizen about its advantages.
 

Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and safely releasing patriotic emotions.

 

 

The whole world stops to watch international sporting events such as the Olympics every four years. The athletes participating put their best performance on display. Sporting events such as the Football World Cup and the Olympics have helped ease international tension, such as when powerful leaders were trying to control the world’s economy.

 

The Olympic Games are a great example that highlights how sporting events can bring nations together, at least temporarily. Ancient History saw Greeks and Romans interrupting battles to participate in the games. Even now, athletes from Palestine and Israel forget their differences, compete peacefully and even embrace each other after an event. Moreover, these popular events can bring world attention to the terrible consequences of wars, putting pressure on leaders to try and reach agreements to end disputes.

 

Similarly, international sporting events have offered benefits in some Global South nations which live in constant internal civil war. For example, Brazil suffers a high unemployment rate, hunger, crime, lack of education, poverty, and corruption. This can be embarrassing and lead to low self-esteem. However, during the Football World Cup festivities, the Brazilian squad, easily considered the best team in the world, invokes an amazing feeling of pride in their country’s people. Most individuals put aside their problems and worries, and even criminal activity decreases. Roads are painted in the national colours, people wear the Brazilian team shirts and buy national flags.

 

In conclusion, popular sporting events play a decisive role in diminishing international tensions and invoking patriotic feelings.

Checklist:
 

Use the following checklist to make sure that your writing contains the positive features at a Band 8

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Task Response:

  • Did you answer ALL parts of the question sufficiently?

  • Are all your ideas and support directly relevant to the question?

  • Did you avoid over-generalizing the topic?

  • Does the Examiner know exactly what you think, and do you present this position clearly for the whole essay?

  • Did you support your ideas with clear examples [not vague research and survey results]?

  • Did you write over 250 words?

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Coherence and Cohesion:

  • Can the Examiner follow your ideas easily, from the beginning of your essay to the end?

  • Does it progress clearly [introduction, main ideas with supporting examples, conclusion]?

  • Did you use a range linking words and phrases?

  • Did you avoid repetition and starting every sentence with a linking device [Firstly…Secondly…Thirdly]?

  • Did you use referencing [These issues…] and substitution [problems/issues] correctly?

  • Did you use sufficient paragraphs?

  • Did you use one paragraph to develop each idea?

  • Is there a clear introductory and concluding paragraph?

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Lexical Resource:

  • Did you use a range of vocabulary that is on-topic?

  • Did you use precise vocabulary choices?

  • Did you avoid memorized language, clichés [double-edged sword], and proverbs?

  • Did you use collocation correctly [environmental problem | global issue]?

  • Did you use appropriate uncommon words [detrimental to | cultural diversity | measures]?

  • Did you correct your spelling mistakes?

  • Did you check for typos?

  • Did you use the correct form of the word you needed [adverbs, nouns, adjectives, and verbs]?

 

Grammatical Range and Accuracy:

  • Did you use simple and complex structures accurately?

  • Did you use a range of structures [conditional, present perfect, relative clauses, modal verbs]?

  • Did you avoid long, complicated sentences?

  • Are your sentences error-free?

  • Did you punctuate correctly?

  • Did you use capital letters to start sentences and for proper nouns?

  • Did you use commas in your complex sentences, where needed? [If the government invests funds in implementing environmentally-friendly solutions, pollution in the atmosphere will be reduced.]

  • Did you use full stops(.) to finish sentences?

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If you follow these 8 steps, you will be well on your way to a band 8 in Writing Task 2.

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