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IELTS Sample Essay Task 2!
What is the basic structure for IELTS writing task 2 in the IELTS exam?
Introduction: Be sure to state the question in your own words in your introduction so that you introduce the topic of your task 2.
Support your opinion: Once you have made your opinion clear, you have to provide facts to justify your choice.
State the opposing point of you: You do not have to persuade the examiner about the opposing opinion, but it is important to state what it is.
Summarise your opinion: In your IELTS exam, the writing task is split into two parts and task 2 is worth 66% of your score. So, you should allocate 40 minutes to writing it. It must contain at least 250 words so waste no time, concentrate, and focus on the task at hand.
Below, you will find a variety of task 2 essay topics that have been seen by students on their IELTS exams. By practicing with these writing task 2 topics, you prepare yourself to write an essay about a wide range of topics.
IELTS Essay Task 2: Evaluation Criteria!
IELTS writing tests are evaluated across 4 dimensions when your band score is calculated:
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Task Achievement – To what extent does the examinee address all parts of the task with a fully developed position, inclusive of fully extended and well-supported ideas?
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Coherence and Cohesion – Does the candidate logically organize the information and ideas? Is the entire essay cohesive?
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Lexical Resource – To what extent does the examinee use a wide range of vocabulary with accuracy? Do they demonstrate sophistication regarding the use of lexical items?
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Grammatical Range and Accuracy – Does the examinee use a range of grammatical structures accurately? The British Council (the administrator of the IELTS) outlines 9 different bands of performance for each of the above dimensions here. Your scores in each of these dimensions are averaged to determine your overall band for your essay.
Let’s take a look at an example essay that scored as band 9 and then we’ll dig into each of these 4 areas to see why it received that score. It's very important to understand what the IELTS examiner is looking for.
IELTS Essay Sample Question:
Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
IELTS Sample Essay Answer
Parents throughout the world place spend time reading with their offspring to prepare them for a school where their literacy skills are further developed; however, recent research suggests that focusing on reading at an early age can be detrimental, and participating in fun activities would be far more beneficial. I am a strong advocate of this approach, and the benefits of it will be covered in this essay.
A fundamental reason for this is that there is no biological age for reading, and pushing infants to acquire this skill before they are ready could have repercussions. For example, in the UK, many boys are reluctant readers, possibly because of being forced to read, and this turned them off reading. By focusing on other activities and developing other skills such as creativity and imagination, when they are ready to read, they usually acquire this skill rapidly.
In addition, the importance of encouraging creativity and developing a child’s imagination must be acknowledged. Through play, youngsters develop social and cognitive skills, for example, they are more likely to learn vocabulary through context rather than learning it from a book.
Furthermore, play allows youngsters to mature emotionally, and gain self-confidence. There is no scientific research which suggests reading at a young age is essential for a child’s development, moreover, evidence suggests the reverse is true. In Finland, early years’ education focuses on playing.
Reading is only encouraged if a child shows an interest in developing this skill. This self-directed approach certainly does not result in Finnish school leavers falling behind their foreign counterparts. In fact, Finland was ranked the sixth-best in the world in terms of reading.
Despite being a supporter of this non-reading approach, I strongly recommend incorporating bedtime stories into a child’s daily routine. However, reading as a regular daytime activity should be swapped for something which allows the child to develop other skills.
Why is this essay a band 9?
Task Achievement
According to the IELTS Writing Band Descriptors, an essay is Band 9 for Task Achievement if it:
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Fully and sufficiently addresses all parts of the task.
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Presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas.
In order to score well on Task Achievement, the most important thing is to make sure you respond to what is being asked of you. Is the prompt asking for an opinion, a discussion of a problem, a solution to a problem, or some combination of these? If you provide an opinion and not a solution when you’re being asked for a solution, you’re not going to score well in this area. Read the question carefully!
The prompt for this essay asks: “To what extent do you agree [with the previous statement]? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.” It wants an opinion – with support!
This essay addresses all parts of this task. The opinion is included in the introduction to make the writer’s position clear, and then the following paragraphs support the writer’s position with examples and justifications. Overall, the response is full and relevant and each of the points is detailed and connected to the thesis.
Coherence and Cohesion
Think of this as “How well does the essay flow? Is it easy to follow and does it all tie together?” The exact characteristics for a Band 9 C&C score are that an essay:
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Uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention
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Skillfully manages to paragraph.
Note the specific wording “it attracts no attention.” The goal here is for things to sound natural and not forced. How do you connect your ideas (ensure cohesion) without it sounding forced? I think there are 2 possible ways:
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Explain your ideas in a logical order so that you don’t need many linking words. This is probably what you do when writing in your own language.
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Use easy linking words like and, but, also, firstly, secondly, finally, for example. These are so common that they attract almost no attention.
This IELTS Sample essay does a good job of this – you’ll notice that each paragraph naturally (logically) follows the one prior, providing additional support for the original opinion, and some simple linking words – in addition, furthermore (both paragraph 2) and moreover (paragraph 3) – are used throughout. These are all good discourse markers that show what is coming next adds to the argument and are slightly more sophisticated than firstly, secondly, and thirdly but don’t come across as being forced.
The other aspect of scoring high in C&C is ensuring an essay is well-structured. What do I mean by that? A well-structured essay has a good introduction, body paragraphs that are easy to follow and connect with one another, and a good conclusion. Each body paragraph should also have its own topic sentence and support and then smoothly transition to the next paragraph.
Our sample IELTS essay has a “simple but good” introduction in which it shows that the examinee has knowledge of the topic and clearly states the writer’s position to set up the rest of the essay. The paragraphs all have topic sentences, which are then supported by examples, and are easy to follow. The main body and conclusion relate back to the thesis in the introduction.
A note on conclusions… there are two schools of thought when it comes to how to conclude an IELTS essay. One is to conclude with one simple sentence so that you spend more time perfecting your main body paragraphs. The other is to wrap up with two sentences, once which includes a small prediction (ie, how you think things might turn out) as a way to show the examiner that you know how to correctly use another tense (which will help boost your GR&A score – more on that in a minute). Either is fine, just don’t forget your conclusion!
Taking time to plan out and organize your response before you start writing is an extremely important step in scoring well in Coherence and Cohesion for your IELTS essay – make sure you do so to ensure your essay is well structured and reads cohesively when you’re done!
Lexical resource
Scoring well in the Lexical Resource dimension is all about (correctly) showing off your vocabulary. The description for a Band 9 here is:
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Uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features, rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips'.
Collocations, topic-specific vocabulary, and phrasal verbs are the name of the game here. To score well, an examinee needs to show that they have a wide-ranging vocabulary and they know how to use it.
Our sample essay does a solid job of showing off a range of vocabulary – you’ll notice that while the essay frequently refers to children, the writer employs different vocabulary (infants, youngsters, offspring, counterparts) to do so.
Note: it is highly likely that you will need to refer to people/children in your IELTS Writing task 2, so make sure that you have lots of different words to use to refer to them.
IELTS examiners do not like to see the words “people,” “children” over and over again! The same goes for the word “important” – make sure you have plenty of alternative phrases (essential and vital are both used in our sample essay).
Other examples of a wide-ranging vocabulary in our essay include using rapidly in place of quickly, mature instead of developing, repercussions to indicate a negative result, and acquiring in place of learning.
Our sample essay also does a good job of using collocations – some examples include “fundamental reason,” “reluctant readers” “social and cognitive skills,” “learn vocabulary through context,” and “strongly recommend.”
The correct use of phrasal verbs also demonstrates one’s grasp of English – because of the semantics involved, they are sometimes one of the most difficult things for English language learners to master. Our essay writer correctly uses a few of these including “turned them off” and “falling behind.”
One note here: students preparing for the IELT S often ask if they should use idioms (like “you’re barking up the wrong tree”) in their essays to further demonstrate their grasp of the language. In my opinion, no, you shouldn’t. Idioms are informal by nature and not appropriate for a written essay of this type. Stick with demonstrating your range of vocabulary and your ability to use phrasal verbs correctly!
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
The final scoring dimension is related to grammar and grammatical structures – do you know them and can you correctly use them?
The Band 9 description for GR&A:
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Uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and accuracy; rare minor errors occur only as slips
Note that there is nothing in the scoring criteria about including specific tenses or sentence constructions. Your main objective should be to reduce the number of mistakes that you make. An essay that contains no mistakes is likely to get a 9 for grammar, regardless of the types of sentences that it may or may not contain.
If there is a nice mix of long and short sentences in your IELTS essays, you’ll meet the grammar requirements. Remember, as soon as you write a “long” sentence you are naturally going to use connectives (linking words), which will make the sentence ‘compound’ or ‘complex’. So, don’t think too much about the grammar – just aim to reduce the number of mistakes that you make, and try to include a few longer sentences.
Some examples from the sample essay that illustrate the writer’s grammatical range and help it easily score as a band 9 include:
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appropriate uses of modal verbs in the passive voice: “are further developed,” “will be covered,” “must be acknowledged,” “should be swapped.”
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“to focus on” is correctly followed by an -ing form
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'However' is used correctly with a semicolon before it and a comma after
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“because of,” “rather than,” and are correctly followed by -ing verbs
IELTS Writing Task 2: 8 steps towards a band 8 by IELTS — January 9th, 2020.
To achieve a Band 8 in Writing Task 2, you will need to produce an essay that contains all the positive features contained in the band 8 writing assessment criteria. Let’s take a look at these in the table below.
Task Response
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sufficiently addresses all parts of the task
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presents a well-developed response to the question with relevant, extended, and supported ideas
Coherence and Cohesion
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sequences information and ideas logically
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manages all aspects of cohesion well
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uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately
Lexical Resource
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uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings
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skillfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation
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produces rare errors in spelling and/or word formation
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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uses a wide range of structures
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the majority of sentences are error-free
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makes only very occasional errors or inappropriacies.
Using the band descriptors as a guide we are going to go through the 8 steps to get you on your way to a band 8 in Writing Task 2. We will start with the task response before moving through all the criteria to show you what an examiner will be looking for in your response.
Step 1: Answer is relevant to the question
Answer what you have been asked in the question. Don’t produce an essay that is close to a topic you have previously prepared. Make sure your examples and ideas are relevant. If you generalize too much and are not specific enough this will affect how your ideas are presented to the examiner.
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Make sure your ideas are directly related to the question
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Use ideas and examples that you are familiar with, and that relate directly to the topic
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Extend your answer to include a number of ideas that will support the question.
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Include irrelevant information
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Over-generalise
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Produce a memorized essay
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Present ‘recent’ research or statistics related to the topic “At least 41% of all men…”
Step 2: Answer all parts of the question
You must read the question carefully and decide how many parts are in it. You must answer all parts of the question to reach a band 6 or higher.
Let’s look at some example IELTS question prompts and see how many parts are in each, and if you need to present your opinion. Remember, it is very important to present a clear position when answering the statement to show that you understand the question being asked and to keep that position clear throughout the essay.
Question Type: To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
How many parts? 1-part question
Opinion required? Yes, agree or disagree, or decide why you agree/disagree equally.
Question Type: Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
How many parts? 3-part question – discuss both views as stated
Opinion required? Yes, present your opinion, it may be one of the views or a combination of both.
Question Type: Why is this so? Give reasons for this and solutions?
How many parts? 3-part question
Opinion required? A position is presented on why this is so, the reasons for this issue and solutions to solve the issue.
Question Type: Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
How many parts? 2-part question
Opinion required? Yes, you must clearly say if there are more advantages or more disadvantages.
Question Type: Why is this so? What effect does it have on the individual and society?
How many parts? 3-part question
Opinion required? Yes, you must give reasons for the statement and then present the effect it has on 1) the individual and 2) society.
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Read the question carefully and decide how many parts are in it
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Present your opinion and support it throughout the whole essay
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If asked to present both views, make sure each view is presented equally (similar paragraph length)
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Watch for plurals. If you are asked to give ‘advantages’, you must present a minimum of 2
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Watch for ‘and’. You may need to comment on more than one element
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Write more than 250 words.
Don’t:
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Ignore parts of the question
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Assume that your opinion is clear, use the first person to ensure the examiner knows it’s your opinion ‘I think’
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Tell the examiner what you are going to say and what you have said
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Produce a short essay.
Step 3: Organise your essay logically, with clear progression using linking phrases
Ideas must be expressed and ordered clearly – starting with an introduction and moving through to a conclusion.
If you are asked to present both views and your opinion, state your opinion at the beginning of the essay and then move on to present both views. You can then come back to your own opinion and then conclude the essay. This is a logical way to present these ideas.
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Use a range of linking words and phrases, but don’t overuse them
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Use adverbial phrases, rather than single basic linkers
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Use referencing and substitution to avoid repetition (this/them/the issue/the problem)
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Use punctuation to make your writing coherent
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Make sure your ideas are sequenced correctly
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Make sure your ideas are logical and easy to follow
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Use a separate paragraph for the introduction and the conclusion
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Use one paragraph for each idea or topic area.
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Overuse basic linking words like firstly (instead, try using ‘The first reason for/ The primary reason for this...’)
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Start every sentence with a linker (Try to put it in the middle of a sentence. Eg. “Some people believe, however, that individuals must also take responsibility for the environment” or “I believe, on the other hand, that individuals do have a responsibility to…”)
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Use numbers, symbols, or abbreviations (1, 2, etc, &, +)
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Use headings or subheadings
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Underline words or phrases
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Use one-sentence paragraphs
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Start every sentence with a linking device.
Step 4: Organise your essay into paragraphs
Use paragraphs to organize your essay into clear parts. Make sure each paragraph contains a clear and developed topic and has a minimum of two sentences.
You can use the acronym “PEEL” when writing your essay:
Point – introduce your topic or topic sentence
Example – an example that supports your point
Explain – why this evidence supports your point
Link – transition to the next topic or paragraph
You must use enough paragraphs to clearly show a structured response. This will show that you can organise and present your thoughts and ideas logically.
Here are some ideas on how many paragraphs you could include in an essay:
Question Type: To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
How many paragraphs?: 4/5
Paragraphs:
1. Introduction
2. Reason why I agree/disagree
3. Another reason why I agree/disagree
4. Concession paragraph reason why I don’t agree/disagree
5. Conclusion
Question Type: Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
How many paragraphs?: 5
Paragraphs:
1. Introduction
2. One view
3. Other views
4. Your opinion
5. Conclusion
Question Type: Why is this so? Give reasons for this and solutions?
How many paragraphs?: 5
Paragraphs:
1. Introduction
2. Reason why it is so
3. Reasons for this
4. Solutions for this
5. Conclusion
Question Type: Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
How many paragraphs?: 5
Paragraphs:
1. Introduction (more advantages)
2. Advantage
3. Another advantage
4. Disadvantage
5. Conclusion
Question Type: Why is this so? What effect does it have on the individual and on society?
How many paragraphs?: 5
Paragraphs:
1. Introduction
2. Why this is so
3. Effect/s on individual
4. Effect/s on society
5. Conclusion
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Use paragraphs
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Use linkers between and within your paragraphs
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Leave a space between each paragraph (a line)
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Use a paragraph for each topic
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Use an introduction and a conclusion.
Don’t:
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Use single-sentence paragraphs
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Use very long paragraphs that cover a whole page (paper test)
Step 5: Use less common vocabulary and spell it correctly
You will see in the band descriptors that a band 8 writer skillfully uses uncommon lexical items. When we learn a language, we use common and uncommon terms. Common terms are words and phrases we use every day to refer to personal experiences and daily habits. Uncommon terms are used when we discuss specific topics or when we use idiomatic language (phrasal verbs).
Words that are old-fashioned and not used in everyday speech should not be used. If you choose a synonym, the meaning must be the same and must not alter the idea being presented. For example, adolescent/teenager have close meaning and can be used interchangeably, however, toddler/baby have quite different meanings.
Collocation is also mentioned in band 8, and it is assumed that you know which words go together, and which words are suitable to use for different topics.
If you are discussing child crime, you could use the term ‘minor’ as this is a legal term used to describe children under the age of 18.
If you use phrasal verbs, make sure that you are using the correct preposition as it can change the meaning:
throw out/away = discard
throw up = vomit/get sick Idioms (cultural language) should only be used if you understand them completely and if they fit the topic you are discussing.
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Use precise word choices
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Use language that we use in everyday speech
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Use words that you understand
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Use words and phrases that are related to the topic
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Use collocation and phrasal verbs (words that go together naturally – environmental pollution | major issue | promising future)
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Make spelling mistakes
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Make typos
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Mix up American and British spelling (You should use one or the other)
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Use a word if you don’t understand it or cannot spell it.
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Use imprecise words like ‘stuff/thing’
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Use slang like ‘gonna’
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Use old-fashioned language [the masses| denizens | myopic view | Hitherto]
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Overuse synonyms, one is enough
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Use idioms/clichés
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Use contractions (can’t, doesn’t)
Step 6: Don’t use memorized language, phrases, or examples
Don’t use any memorized language, phrases, or examples throughout your essay. They are easy for examiners to spot and don’t demonstrate your ability to write fluently.
Overused phrases, idioms, proverbs, and clichés should also be avoided, again, they are often used when speaking. These include phrases like:
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The grass is always greener on the other side
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Love is blind
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Off the top of my head
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Old is gold
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A friend in need is a friend indeed
Additionally, the following terms should not be used when writing as they are vague and do not address a task appropriately. You should always be using clear language and make appropriate word choices that will express your ideas clearly.
BadGoodBadGood
NowadaysIn recent timesCrux of the discussionThe main/key issue is…
Can’tcannotStuff/thingUse the correct word!
Controversial issueMajor issuee.g.For example, …
The pros and consBenefits and drawbacksEvery coin has two sides/facesThere are both disadvantages and advantages…
FirstlyThe primary reason whyA double-edged swordThe solution can also cause issues as…
SecondlyLack of education is another reason why…In a nutshellIn conclusion…
Step 7: Use a variety of complex sentence structures
At band 8 it is expected that you can use a wide range of structures accurately to present your ideas and opinion. Show the examiner that you can use a wide range of structures and make sure your sentences are error-free.
It is important to use a mix of complex and simple sentences. But remember, your complex sentences should not be long and complicated.
Your punctuation needs to be accurate, using capitalisation, commas and full stops correctly.
The most common errors made can be found below:
GrammarCommon errors
Relative ClauseUsing the pronoun incorrectly – who/that/which
Conditional clauseChoosing the wrong tense for the clause type – Zero, Type 1,2,3
Present perfect/past Choosing the wrong tense – had/have had
PassiveChoosing the wrong past participle
GerundsMaking errors with -ing
Countable nouns Making errors with singular and plural nouns
ArticlesUsing a/the incorrectly, or not using it at all
Subject/verb agreement The girls ‘are’ – singular or plural
PrepositionsChoosing the wrong dependent preposition, an incorrect preposition of place and so on.
Punctuation Used incorrectly, or not used at all.
Step 8: Checklist
Use the following checklist to make sure that your writing contains the positive features at a Band 8
Task Response:
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Did you answer ALL parts of the question sufficiently?
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Are all your ideas and support directly relevant to the question?
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Did you avoid over-generalizing the topic?
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Does the Examiner know exactly what you think, and do you present this position clearly for the whole essay?
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Did you support your ideas with clear examples [not vague research and survey results]?
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Did you write over 250 words?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Can the Examiner follow your ideas easily, from the beginning of your essay to the end?
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Does it progress clearly [introduction, main ideas with supporting examples, conclusion]?
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Did you use a range linking words and phrases?
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Did you avoid repetition and starting every sentence with a linking device [Firstly…Secondly…Thirdly]?
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Did you use referencing [These issues…] and substitution [problems/issues] correctly?
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Did you use sufficient paragraphs?
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Did you use one paragraph to develop each idea?
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Is there a clear introductory and concluding paragraph?
Lexical Resource:
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Did you use a range of vocabulary that is on-topic?
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Did you use precise vocabulary choices?
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Did you avoid memorized language, clichés [double-edged sword], and proverbs?
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Did you use collocation correctly [environmental problem | global issue]?
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Did you use appropriate uncommon words [detrimental to | cultural diversity | measures]?
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Did you correct your spelling mistakes?
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Did you check for typos?
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Did you use the correct form of the word you needed [adverbs, nouns, adjectives, and verbs]?
Grammatical Range and Accuracy:
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Did you use simple and complex structures accurately?
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Did you use a range of structures [conditional, present perfect, relative clauses, modal verbs]?
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Did you avoid long, complicated sentences?
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Are your sentences error-free?
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Did you punctuate correctly?
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Did you use capital letters to start sentences and for proper nouns?
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Did you use commas in your complex sentences, where needed? [If the government invests funds in implementing environmentally-friendly solutions, pollution in the atmosphere will be reduced.]
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Did you use full stops(.) to finish sentences?
If you follow these 8 steps, you will be well on your way to a band 8 in Writing Task 2.
How to write a Band 9 Essay in IELTS?
The IELTS Writing Test consists of 2 tasks of which are essay writing. In the first task, you’ll have to write an essay of at least 150 words, and in the second task, an essay of at least 250 words. You’ll get an hour altogether for both the essays, so it is advisable to not spend more than 20 minutes on task 1. Task 1 will be worth around 33% of the total Writing test score while task 2 is worth around 66%.
The Writing Test will be assessed based on 4 marking criteria, so if you’re aiming to write a band 9 essay, you should aim to fulfill each of the criteria. The 4 marking criteria, namely, Task Response, Vocabulary, Grammatical Accuracy, and Coherence and Cohesion, are given equal weightage of 25% each.
Now I’ll tell you about the process you need to go through while aiming to write a Band 9 essay.
Let’s take an IELTS Writing task 2 sample question:
“Some people believe that the violence shown in movies and video games has a damaging effect on society. While others believe that these don’t have an influence on people’s behavior. What is your opinion?”
After reading the question, the first step would be,
Understand the type of question given in the task
The five most common types of IELTS Writing essay questions are:
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Opinion (Agree or Disagree)
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Advantages and Disadvantages
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Problem (and Solution)
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Discussion (Discuss both views)
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Two-part Question
So based on the type of question you get, you have to approach it accordingly.
For example, in case you get an advantage and disadvantage type of question, you should remember:
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Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages.
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Possibly the advantage in body paragraph 1 and the disadvantage in body paragraph 2.
In case you get a problem type of question, remember to:
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Discuss the problem, cause, and solution according to what the task question requires.
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Give your opinion only if it is asked.
In case you get a discussion type of question, you should remember:
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Discuss both the views without favoring one over the other
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Possibly one viewpoint in body paragraph 1 and second viewpoint in body paragraph 2.
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Give your opinion only if it is asked.
So in this case, since the question ended with, ‘What is your opinion?’ we come to the conclusion that it’s an opinion type of question.
Since it is an opinion type of question we should remember:
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State your personal opinion regarding the topic
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Support your opinions with clear reasons
With this in mind, we move on to the next step.
Plan out your content
After reading the question, since it is an opinion type, you have to plan out your opinion regarding the topic and how you wish to express it. Do you agree with the statement or you disagree with it?
In this case, do you agree that the violence shown in the media has an effect on society or do you disagree with that? And since it’s an opinion question, you can only either agree or disagree. You can’t take both sides. And once you decide whether you agree or disagree with the statement, you also have to think about the reasons behind having such an opinion.
After this, the next step is
Keep in mind the essay structure
Once you figure out the message you’re gonna convey and how you wish to convey it, you plan out your essay structure. An essay should always be presented in 4 paragraphs.
Paragraph 1 (Introduction) –
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Paraphrase the question
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Give an outline of your opinion.
Example (Taking the sample question into consideration)
‘Violence has been a part of society long before movies and video games were developed. While the first movie was projected in the 1890s and the first video games were developed in the 1950s, there were great wars like the War of Spanish Succession, the American Revolutionary War, the French Revolutionary War, and many others in the 16th and early 17th century. So I think that movies and video games have very little influence on people’s behavior. In this following essay, I would like to present my view with proper evidence.’
As you can see, in paragraph 1 I’ve started the essay with an introduction, by paraphrasing the question and then have given an outline of my opinion.
Paragraph 2 & 3 (Content Body) –
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Go in-depth regarding what you discussed in the introduction
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Give examples
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Use proper vocabulary
Example (Taking the sample question into consideration)
‘The rates of crime and violence have been on the rise for quite some time now. It will be wrong to condemn movies and video games because every conscious person knows that they are meant only for entertainment. Sometimes, we might like to imitate the actions shown. But we know that it is almost impossible to do it without expert help and imaginary circumstances. So, it is somewhat unnecessary to think that an activity that is not a habit and requires hypothetical circumstances can affect our behavior.
Secondly, in my opinion, crimes and violence depend on a particular state of mind. Even if a person plays video games on a daily basis, he/she will not commit a crime unless he/she has prior psychological issues. For example, an educated person with a positive set of mind who plays games like “Garena Free Fire” or “Pubg” or watches action movies like “Final Destination” or “Rambo” may not become violent or commit crimes. But, people who are already depressed, had a violent past, or have psychological issues may be influenced. So, it is not the particular influence of the movies or the video games. They can be triggered by any violent event around them.
Playing video games and continuously watching movies may become addictive to most people. But, it is not evidently proved that any source of brutal entertainment can aggravate crime. Rather, the escapist world created by them can be a source of relaxation for most people.’
Paragraph 4 (Conclusion) –
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Summary of the main points
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Summary of your opinion
Example (Again taking the sample question into consideration)
‘To conclude, history itself proves that violence has always been a part of our civilization, even before the advent of games and movies. Furthermore, the alarming rise of crime and violence is mostly the result of the frustration created by the modern lifestyle, and games and movies are a very insignificant part of it.’
As you can see, my conclusion paragraph includes a summary of the main points of the question as well as my opinion on the topic.
IELTS writing task 2 sample Band 9 essay (or) model essay
Essay writing on social media:
Nowadays, with the rise in violence and crime all around us, some people believe that the violence shown in movies and video games has an influence, while others believe that it doesn’t. I believe that media violence does not have that much of an effect on the rising crime in society.
Firstly, although I agree that the rate of crime and violence around us has increased lately, I don’t think we can blame media violence for that. I am sure any responsible citizen who watches a movie or plays a video game with violence in it, is aware that it is there only for the sake of entertainment. That being said, in any case, if any individual does cause harm to his society, it would have to be due to his character or his circumstance. So in my opinion, a reasonable and conscious person would not cause harm to others, regardless of what he sees in any form of media.
Moreover, movies and video games actually provide escapism into a virtual world where people can relax and release their anxiety. After a long day at work, when someone comes back home and watches a movie or plays a video game, they automatically forget about all their worries and tensions and recover from the frustration they may have. Personally, I enjoy playing video games as soon as I get back home from work.
Finally, despite some people believing otherwise, I don’t believe that the violence shown in the media plays a role in a person’s character or in the increase of violence and crime in our society. In fact, the content in the movies and videos can actually help in reducing the frustration and stress factor.
Remember the Marking Criteria/Scheme
To write a band 9 essay, it is naturally important to make sure you focus on the 4 marking criteria while writing the essay. Here are the criteria you need to focus on, along with the explanation.
Task Achievement
To address and acknowledge all the parts of the task question, and answer accordingly with well-supported ideas.
Coherence and Cohesion
To present the information and ideas in an organized manner with a good amount of linking words.
Lexical Resource
To use a wide range of vocabulary with accuracy and almost no mistakes.
Grammatical Range
To use proper grammar in a range of grammatical structures.
Once you’ve kept all these criteria while writing the essay, the final step is
Check the Word Count
Since you’re writing a Task 2 Band 9 essay, you should aim to write at least 260 words, and as you can see the word count of the sample essay, it is 287 words. So feel free to refer to the given sample essay to understand how to do well, taking the structure and each of the marking criteria into consideration.
July / August 2021 sample task 2 questions
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Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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In many situations, people who break the law should be warned instead of punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.
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Some people think employers should not care about the way their employees dress, but the quality of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some students take one year off between finishing high school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?
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An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry. Why do you think it is the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families. What are the possible reasons and the effects on the people themselves and their families?
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Some people say that nowadays children have an easy life, and some people think that the life of children was easier in the past. Discuss both points of view and also provide relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
February / March 2021 sample task 2 questions
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Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Some people believe the purpose of education should be helping the individual to become useful for society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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Many people believe that a person’s culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that it has only minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive development or negative?
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The movement of people from villages to cities for work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?
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In the world of the internet, people write product reviews of products and services. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer international products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intelligent than humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Some people think that dangerous extreme sports such as rock climbing and sky-diving should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
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Young people are often influenced by their peers. Do the advantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages?
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Some people believe that nowadays too much money is being spent on weddings and birthdays. Why do you think it is happening? What can be done to improve the situation?
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In many countries, the legal driving age is 18 years old. Some people believe it is the right age to learn how to drive a car, whereas others say that the minimum age should be 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
January 2021 sample task 2 questions
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Some people feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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Some people say that TV advertisements are helpful for viewers, while others disagree. What is your opinion?
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Some people think the spread of multinational companies and globalization produce positive outcomes for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music?
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Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others are of the opinion that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
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Prison is the common way in most countries try to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
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Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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Some people argue that holding sporting events is beneficial to a country's development. However, other people hold the opposite opinion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think that good teamwork makes a company successful, others think that good leadership is the reason behind the success of a company. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Other Bonus IELTS Essay Topics
Discussions (Discursive Essay – Discuss both views)
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. Others argue that they should spend more money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative impacts on society and should be banned, while others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foreign country. Others think that they should live as a separate minority group with a different lifestyle. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Many people think that cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people the freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion
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Some people say art (music, paintings, poetry, etc.) can be created by any human being, while others believe that only people born with special abilities can create art. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
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Teachers used to convey information, but now with wide resources of information. Some people think that there is no role for teachers to play in modern education, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
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Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. Evaluate the arguments both and against this before reaching an opinion?
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Some people think that robots are very important for humans’ future development. Others, however, think that robots are dangerous inventions that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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The development of technology has caused environmental problems. So, some people think people should choose a simpler way of life, while others think we should use technology to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. However, others argue that there are still some advantages of adverts. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
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Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people’s lives in negative ways. Others disagree and say that it is also positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone. Explain the benefits of each and give your own view?
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Some people say that healthcare and education should be the responsibility of the government but some people think that that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
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Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe that is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Opinion (Argumentative Essay – Agree or Disagree)
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Too much money has been spent on looking after and repairing old buildings. Therefore, we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Researches show that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, the advertisements of food products should be banned in the same way as cigarettes advertising is banned in many countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some people say that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore they need more of these subjects to be included in the timetable. Do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think that the government should not spend money on building theatres and sports stadiums. Instead, it should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
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The best way to understand other cultures is to work in a multinational organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The advantage of English spreading as a global language will continue to outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Is it better to be unemployed in jobs rather than to be employed in jobs even if they don’t feel happy or enjoy it? Do you agree or disagree?
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Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Nowadays young people are spending their leisure period in shopping centers but not engaging themselves in other activities such as sport or music, which can affect themselves and society negatively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think this is a complete waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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It is generally discussed among the public that extreme sports such as sky diving and rock climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative. What is your opinion?
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Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think that children’s success in adult life depends on the way their parents brought up them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but other people claim that it is the individual’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
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Many employees may work at home with modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers, not the employers. Is it a positive or negative development?
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A detailed description of crime will affect the people and cause many social problems. Some people say that the media should be strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn’t worry about producing buildings as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?
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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?
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Rich countries should not employ skilled labor from poor countries, as poor countries need the workers more. Do you agree or disagree?
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Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people think that financial support from governments should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. Do you agree or disagree?
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Television has changed the quality of life for the ordinary person. Do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think the typical teaching of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. Are you optimistic or pessimistic about this view?
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In several years many languages die out. Some say it is not important because if we speak fewer languages life would be easier. Do you agree or disagree?
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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, and the protection is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some people believe that tourists should accept social and environmental responsibility while others believe that tourists should not accept any responsibility at all. What is your opinion?
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Some people argue that individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Therefore, only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Today, the majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think that it affects the whole family?
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Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity. Thus, some people believe new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Some people argue that companies and private individuals, rather than governments, should pay for pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared for the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The only way to improve the safety on our own road is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they shouldn’t waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos, and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years’ time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist travel, rather than limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Housing shortages in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government action can solve this problem. What is your opinion?
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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent technological developments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The workplace nowadays is trying to employ an equal number of females and males. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work, and communicate via the internet without face-to-face contact with others. Is it positive or negative?
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In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak this language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Multi-cultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn the children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Throughout history, male leaders have always led us to violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements, and other TV programs) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion?
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Some people argue that the government should spend money on public services and facilities, but not on the arts. Do you agree or disagree?
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In some countries, old age is highly valued, while in others youth is emphasized. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
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Do you agree or disagree with the statement that families are as close as they used to be?
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Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it compared with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?
Advantages & Disadvantages
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Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages?
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Some people think that animals should be kept in men made cells. What are the disadvantages of keeping animals in zoos?
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People can live and work anywhere they want to choose because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some of the methods used to do this may be dangerous to human health and may have negative effects on local communities. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
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The spread of English as a “global language” is an issue nowadays. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?
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It is better for students at university to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents. What are the advantages and disadvantages, and give your own opinion?
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Many museums charge people for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Problems/Causes & Solutions
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The subjects and lesson contents are decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people argue that teachers should make the choice. What are the pros and cons of each method, give some solutions?
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The speeding up of life in many areas such as travel and communication has negative effects on society at all levels— individual, national and global. Evaluate the effects?
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In some countries, the rate of crimes committed by teenagers is increasing. What are the reasons and what can be done to relieve the problem?
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The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in cities are faced with? Give some solutions to these problems.
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In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why is it the case? What can be done to deal with this?
Two-part Questions
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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. What is the purpose of taxes? Why do some people refuse to pay taxes and explain the effects on the society?
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People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really important? Give reasons.
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Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?
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Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away” culture because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what extent do you agree with this opinion and what measures can you recommend reducing this problem?
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With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important do you think is letter-writing?
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In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar Why is it the case? Is it a good thing or a bad thing?
Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about current events. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Many are of the view that news is best received through traditional newspapers while others feel that more modern media is preferable. In my opinion, despite the better habits engendered by reading the newspaper, it is impossible to argue convincingly against the convenience of newer mediums.
On the one hand, reading the newspaper allows for a healthy, distraction-free environment. This relates to both the content and the presentation of newspapers. Newspapers undergo rigorous editing and articles are necessarily published more slowly, allowing for better writing and fewer sensationalist headlines. An individual reading the newspaper can be compared to someone eating healthy foods or doing exercise. Similarly, newspapers are not vulnerable to the wide array of potential distractions on digital devices. There is less chance a newspaper reader will be distracted by social media or their personal communications.
On the other hand, there are a wide variety of functions only provided by more recent forms of media. Newspapers are primarily based on text, with images adding slight variety. In contrast, online media enables an individual to watch videos, listen to audio, cross-reference sources, consult primary sources, and generally take full advantage of the digital world. For example, a person who reads an article about a politician’s remarks can then check for the video in order to hear their words in context and later visit a site such as Twitter to analyze reactions from the general public, journalists, experts, and the politician. This information can then be easily shared through online messaging services or social media.
In conclusion, there are definite advantages to non-digital news sources, however, these are overshadowed by the versatility of modern media. It is the duty of individuals to ensure they enjoy the positives without the drawbacks of spending too much time online.
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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds and providing us with new avenues while keeping ourselves updated with the latest news and current affairs. Therefore, a fair amount of people believe, a conventional way of newspaper reading will be disappeared. I do not completely accord with it because a conventional newspaper is the easiest and cheapest way to get news.
To embark on, there are multiple reasons why the traditional ways of getting news are still popular. First of all, reading the newspaper has become the ardent habit of many people. Everyone whether from the affluent or middle class is seen desperately waiting for paper in the morning and enjoying it reading with a cup of tea. Moreover, these are the portable, cheapest and easiest ways of knowing about global activities. It can be carried from one place to another in the bag and is available at an economical price. It is so handy and merely by continuing flip of pages can make you omniscient. Secondly, electricity and other appliances are not required. Moreover, the other attachments are like icing on the cake. For instance, the Hindustan times have multiple attachments like women’s fashion, career guide, culinary art, and so on.
However, undoubtedly, technology has given the radical approach to reading news, for example, videos provide a full and clear view to reading besides that we can download, share and forward it to our relatives and friends. Needless to say that technophobic will be having no place in this ever-advanced modern world.
To conclude, the lives of people are drastically affected by advanced versions of technology yet, in my opinion, it will not be able to pose threat to the existence of traditional newspapers and magazines.
NOTE: IMPRESSIVE INTRODUCTION WITH PROPER REPHRASING IS THE MAIN KEY FACTOR TO GET The DESIRED SCORE IN IELTS WRITING TASK 2 QUESTION ANSWER.
2. Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Children are the backbone of every country. So, there are people who tend to believe that youngsters should be encouraged to initiate social work as it will result in flourished society and individualistic growth of youngsters themselves. I, too believe that this motivation has more benefits than its drawbacks.
To begin with, social work by children can be easily associated with personality development because, during this drive, they tend to communicate with a variety of people, which leads to polished verbal skills. For example, if they start convincing rural people to send their children to school they have to be such a convincing attitude along with developed verbal skills to deal with diverse kinds of people there. This improved skill will help them lifelong in every arena. Apart from this, the true values of life like tolerance, patience, team spirit, cooperation can be learned. Besides that, the young minds serve the country with full enthusiasm that gives the feeling of fulfillment and self-satisfaction. This worthiness for themselves brims them with self-confidence and patriotic feeling. Moreover, going and experiencing multiple cultures and traditions make their horizon so broad that add one more feather to their cap.
However, It is truly said, no rose without thrones. Can the drawbacks of this initiation be ignored? Children go to school, participate in different curriculum activities, endure the pressure of peers, parents, and teachers and in the competitive world, they should not be expected to serve society without their self-benefits. This kind of pressure might bring resentment in their mind.
In conclusion, I believe, the notion of a teenager doing unpaid work is indeed good but proper monitoring and care should be given to avoid untoward consequences.
NOTE: ALWAYS SPEND AT LEAST FOUR OR FIVE MINUTES PLANNING YOUR IDEAS BEFORE YOU START WRITING YOUR ANSWERS TO THE IELTS WRITING TASK 2 QUESTIONS.
3. Do children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded?
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Children are the future of the nation and how they should be raised, is a debatable issue. Some people believe that they should be exposed to physical punishment while others say constant appreciation is required for them. According to me, these arguments need proper scrutinization before forming an opinion.
To begin with, there are many advantages of conferring rewards to children first of all, appreciation and verbal praise can have a magical impact on the behavior of the children because when they are appreciated for good conduct they come to know about the value of good behavior and try to keep continue with that. The more they brim with positive comments, the more they are confident.
On the other hand, children who are subjected to artificial physical punishment are seen to lack of self-confidence. A survey conducted on the behavior of children revealed that a child exposed to punitive actions by my parents is more aggressive and furious than others of his age. Hence beatings to a child can never be fruitful.
On the contrary, there is no denying the fact that training the notorious and ferocious mind is a hard nut to crack because it is true that rod is the only logic for the fools. Moreover, some children repeat mistakes even after being warned and punished, this type of stubbornness forces parents and guardians to give them beatings. Needless to say, over-pampering may have an adverse effect on children. In this present scenario, parents have one or two children and this pampering distracts them away from their path.
To conclude, children are the tender buds and nurturing them is really a major responsibility. Therefore, a fair judgment on behavior is required for a good upbringing.
NOTE: IN IELTS WRITING TASK 2 QUESTION ANSWERS THE EXAMINER WILL ASSESS THE COHERENCE AND COHESION OF YOUR ANSWER. THEY WILL JUDGE HOW YOUR IDEAS ARE ORGANIZED AND LINKED TO MAKE SENSE.
4. Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Children are the tender buds of society and they are required to be taught the true values of life. Therefore, some people tend to believe that feeling of competition should be infused in them while others believe that the possession of cooperative values is required for them. I will discuss the merits and demerits of both aspects before reaching any opinion.
To begin with, there are many reasons why children should be having computational values? Firstly, competition motivates youngsters to accelerate their efforts to attain a higher level in education and in other activities. They start doing work hard to compete with others and understand the value of hard work. This dedication and hard work help them to stand first everywhere. Secondly, computational values inculcate self-confidence and self-independence in children. When they participate in activities and compete with others, they are more likely to have a feeling of self-achievement and fulfillment. They feel worthy that provides them balanced and peaceful mind. They tend to become self-reliant and that results in the best decision talking ability in them. Moreover, a sense of completion is the need of the hour. Undoubtedly, in the modern era, people since their childhood till adults, face completion for example- in school there are a dance competition, race competition, poem competition and when they grow adults, they face competition in taking a job while taking admission in college and even face competitive in an exam. Thus, a value is highly required.
On the other hand, it is needless to say that how important is it to inculcate the value of cooperation. This is the only feeling by which a child can learn teamwork, team spirit, co-existence, tolerance, and patience. Moreover, if history is seen it becomes quite evident that the well-known icons of the society are only those who had a helping and sacrificing attitude. A self-centered human being cannot earn fame in society. Secondly, incessant preaching for competition may result in rivalry feeling for the peer group and others. These rivalry feelings take no time in turning into jealousy and personal grudges. A heart full of jealousy for others can never hold good for themselves and for others.
To conclude, after gauging both, competitional and cooperative values, I feel that both values have their own importance. Thus, a child should be brought up by imparting both equally.
NOTE: WIDE RANGE OF LEXICAL RESOURCES IS ONE OF THE FOUR PARAMETERS CHECKED BY THE EXAMINER. SO IN YOUR IELTS WRITING TASK 2 QUESTION ANSWER AVOID THE REPEATING WORDS.TRY TO READ IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE ANSWERS FOR PRACTICE.
5. Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Art is the externalization of individual skills and reflects the heritage of a country. At present, art seems to lose its value because of less concern by the government, however, I feel that art still requires being given more value than other basic necessities of any nation.
To begin with, there are many reasons why art should be the priority of any country? First of all, It is the best source of generating revenue income for the government. Museums, art galleries, and musical concerts are the place, where a handsome revenue is taken. Mesmerizing sculptures, beautifully engraved paintings by renowned artists adorn the beauty of the museums and attract tourists. Undoubtedly, these tourists are the greatest source of revenue income. These tourists throng in large numbers on these historical places and monuments that help to promote local handicrafts, resulting in providing income to the small-scale industries. Secondly, art is the cultural and historical reflection of every country. It is the real asset of every country that brings uniqueness and pride for every country and if a fund is not allocated by the government then it will be difficult to keep this alive.
However, some opponents of the art say that spending money by a government on art hampers the development of the country in regards to good infrastructure, road system, efficient transport system, and medical facilities. Moreover, allocating money to education and medical facilities definitely lessens the literacy rate and increases well being of the nation that helping a country to grow.
To conclude, art is really an integral part of every country, therefore, the government should fund art museums and promote artists’ values to keep and maintain the glorify the history of the country otherwise artists and art will be lost in oblivion.
NOTE: WHILE ANSWERING THE IELTS WRITING TASK 2 QUESTIONS NEVER USE NOTES AND BULLET POINTS. THE LANGUAGE SHOULD BE FORMAL WHILE AVOIDING ABBREVIATIONS.
6. When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. Do you agree and disagree with this statement?
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds and undoubtedly this advancement is taking a toll on traditional values. I do believe that in this technological world traditional values are bound to disappear.
To initiate with, there are many reasons why these conventional values have no existence in this modern world. First of all, In this fast-paced world, everyone is assisted with the mobile phone to stay connected with their family and friends. However, in olden times people used to send letters and stand in the long queues on S.T.D and I.S.D just for the maturity of one call. This advancement in the modes of communication has proved that traditional skills are worth nothing.
Secondly, technology has transformed the world of fashion. Earlier people used to do knitting, stitching, and designing manually but now machines have made every task easier and comfortable. To substantiate my view, many fashion designing students were seen portraying pictures of models themselves for checking the compatibility of colors but at present, this work is done in seconds on multifarious advanced software. Apart from this, hardly anyone is seen purchasing pitchers for cool water because of the invention of refrigerators.
To conclude, the evolution of modern technology is an ongoing process, so, the time-consuming traditional methods will not be able to maintain their pace with these latest trends. hence, it is useless and a wastage of time to preserve them.
NOTE: EXAMINER ASSESSES THE GRAMMATICAL ACCURACY AND THE TYPES OF SENTENCE STRUCTURE, YOU USE IN EXPLANATION. IT IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT IELTS WRITING TASK 2 TIPS THAT EVERY STUDENT SHOULD KNOW ABOUT.
7. Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Art is the externalization of the skills of an artist. Therefore, there are the people who are in favor to impart full liberty to the artists; however, others oppose this opinion freely. In my opinion, freedom is necessary up to a greater extent but there should be proper surveillance on their work to avoid any unpleasant situation.
To begin with, there are many reasons why some people are in favor to give full freedom to artists. First of all, if they are free from any suppression that helps them to unveil all the social issues of the society without any fear. They expose the cancerous spot and request society to uproot that. Any type of confinement will not let them express their thoughts. Secondly, these creative artists are the nerve of every nation because of their extraordinary skills; if they work freely they, undoubtedly, have the potential to make a masterpiece that brings recognition to every country on the map of the world.
However, I feel that full autonomy may have an adverse effect on the individual and on the society because many times artists are seen painting any objectionable picture, adding any anti-social dialogue in the films that result in the communal riots and hurt sentiments of the people. These types of acts cost the life of the people. For example, once in a popular film, some Hindu gods are shown begging. This film has not only brought criticism by the Hindu society but also sparked communal riots that have ended up in the demise of some people. Therefore, they should not be given full freedom.
To sum up, although artists are required to give full liberty for exploring their creativity yet government should ensure that that very act may not hurt others' feelings.
NOTE: In IELTS WRITING TASK 2 QUESTION ANSWER YOU WILL LOSE MARKS IF YOU COPY THE STATEMENT OR WORDS FROM QUESTION.
8. Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
There has always been a raging debate whether art is an important subject for children in schools or it can be neglected in the views of other important subjects. I am going to scrutinize both aspects in further paragraphs before forming an opinion in the last.
To begin with, on the one side of the coin, there are many reasons for supporting other important subjects in children’s school curriculum; firstly, modern technology like computer literacy has become the need of the hour. It is one of the most demanded skills for a job in every sector. If they spend most of their time learning art they will not be able to face cut-throat competitions of this scenario. Moreover, the knowledge of essential subjects like math, science is highly required in every field.
Secondly, Art despite being highly appreciated still does not ensure any career growth because most of the fields like engineering, marketing, IT professionals, and managers are found graduated and post-graduated in these important subjects.
On the other flip side of the coin, art is a creative skill that has wonderful imagination power. It provides the wings to the fantasy and expresses the feelings without the exchange of words. To illustrate, once I have come across the painting in which the difference between the rich and poor’s plight was depicted through painting only. Moreover, music is also a piece of art and works as a healing therapy in the hectic world. Secondly, artists bring laurels for the country across the world and ensure that the cultural heritage of the country may not extinct. For this, they are highly paid and appreciated. That kind of respect is not less than a flourished career.
To conclude, in my view, the selections of the subjects should be left on the students in which they are interested because that very interest helps them to grow in their life.
NOTE: EVERY ASPIRANT OF IELTS SHOULD LEARN ALL THE FOUR TYPES OF SENTENCE STRUCTURE IT WILL HELP YOU IN GIVING IELTS WRITING TASK 2 QUESTION’S ANSWER.
9. Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds in each and every field and communication is not the exception. However, this tremendous change in the ways of interaction cannot be regarded as fruitful straightforwardly because of its certain drawbacks which spark debate on its positive and negative effects.
To embark on, with regards to positive development, one of the prominent benefits is that technology has made communication easier and comfortable. At present, people are hardly one click away from the nears and dears one because of the modern developments like Skype, video conferencing, Whatsapp, and social networking sites, like Facebook. These advancements have made everyone social up to much extent. Secondly, there are tremendous changes in the way of letters and telegrams were sent and in making calls. People used to stand in long queues on S.T.D and I.S.D booths but now mobile phones and advanced gizmos facilitate everyone to interact freely.
On the other hand, certain drawbacks cannot be ignored like today’ people not only spend a long time in using computers but also do not prefer to meet their friends and relatives face to face leading to a faded relationship. For instance, one of my childhood friends preferred to meet me personally on different occasions like a festival and on birthdays but nowadays, she sends messages wishing me and sends greetings in my mail. Even most of the family members are suffering from asphyxia, a disease sparks from isolation. This is really a worrisome issue for imitated relationships.
To sum up, despite having numerous drawbacks, no one can afford to turn face from this ever fast modern technology that has to facilitate our lives.
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10. Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
It is true that language acquisition is a complex process. Therefore, it is advisable to teach a foreign language at elementary school than secondary. According to me, the merits of this notion outnumbered its demerits.
To embark on, there are numerous benefits of teaching a foreign language to children at an early age. First of all, children are having a receptive mind with good grasping power. This age is the learning stage of life. Whatever is learned in child age, can remember longer in life. Besides that, children are less egoistic and do not afraid of committing a mistake in learning. As failures are the pillars of success while continuous practicing they may attain a reasonable level of language. Undoubtedly, a language consists of different dialects, grammatical rules, intonations, denotation, functions syntax, and style. By practicing these, a child can possess unmatchable linguistic skills. Secondly, everyone is in a mad race to fly board in this modern scenario, and possession of a foreign language equips them to communicate freely for easy survival. Moreover, polished communication skills have become a need for the hour of the cutthroat competitional world.
However, it is also a fact that going to school, doing homework, taking part in extra-curriculum activities is itself a time-consuming activity for students. If they are exposed to regular language teaching sessions that will make them pressurize and psychological illness. This type of burden will hamper their physical, mental, and psychological growth.
To conclude, even though, teaching a foreign language may aggravate their existing burden yet preparing the young mind for further survival has become mandatory by imparting linguistic skills.
11. Most schools offer some type of physical education program to their students. Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Physical education programs are having paramount importance in a school curriculum, therefore, there have been a number of given opinions, that physical education should be compulsory because of its mental and physical health benefits for a student, however, some oppose it. I will discuss both types of opinions before a conclusion.
To begin with, undoubtedly, it has been proved that physical activities are the part and parcel of healthy life. Students who are exposed to these types of physical exercises can increase their stamina and resistance power. According to medical science, a Strong immune system helps to prevent certain diseases like diabetes, obesity, and indigestion. It not only improves the stamina of the body but also makes one mentally strong. Besides that, A recent study has revealed that indulgence in these activities does not let the students sneak time for electronic gadgets.
Furthermore, physical programs are very helpful in inculcating the values of team spirit, cooperation, and coexistence. Therefore, the array of benefits make it an inevitable part of the school’s curriculum…
On the other hand, there are situations and certain circumstances when a physical program needs to be sacrificed. Students with certain disabilities and illnesses somehow should not be forced to be a part of this. Their impairments prevent them to be active and physically enthusiastic. Indeed, there is the requirement to have it optional but it is also imperative to understand that they should be equipped with any other educational aspects like computer numeracy and soft skills.
In conclusion, physical education should not be optional since it provides physical and mental growth to a student but the circumstances of impaired candidates should be kept in view.
Note:– To address each and every question in a statement is highly advisable for the high score.
12. What are the main reasons and solutions for re-offend?
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Ans. Every country has its own laws to combat crime and criminals. However, nowadays, it is quite apparent that many criminals repeat crimes even after being punished. It has really become a matter of concern because of multiple reasons and according to me, this kind of problem should be addressed immediately.
To start with, undoubtedly, these criminals get influenced by many reasons like social isolation, unemployment, psychological disabilities, and lack of education. Unfortunately, they are subjected to humiliations very frequently by society people that disturb them mentally and pull them into a constant state of depression. The imbalanced mental condition never lets them get rid of a criminal record. Moreover, their past criminal background leaves them in the lurch of unemployment. While finding no way to meet both ends, they start following the same path of destruction. Lack of knowledge and skills is the other most contributing factor.
It is true that there is no problem without a solution. The government should get up from a long slumber and initiate rehabilitation programs for them in which they should be given vocational training for self-employment. The other sustainable approach is the psychological nourishment where they can be exposed to regular spiritual and religious lectures. That will help them to keep them away from criminal activities. Moreover, the individual should do something on grass root level by remaining sympathetic towards them as Gandhi Ji said; Hate the sin, not the sinner.
Indeed, the aforesaid measures are highly required to curb this problem as a stitch on time saves nine.
Note:- Organize ideas into separate paragraphs. You will lose points if you do not divide your essay into paragraphs.
13. Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
Language is the best way of communication. However, it is seen that many languages are getting disappear in this modern era. There are people who believe that it will be convenient if there are fewer languages across the globe. I also support this opinion up to a greater extent.
To start with, in the justification of my notion, first of all, the fewer the languages, the easier the communication. There will be no language barrier and exchange of ideas among people that will ultimately help in developing harmonious relationships. Besides that, it will not only result in a flourished relationship among the masses but also make political relations strong as there will be more chances of exchanging scientific research and invention.
Moreover, having fewer languages will prove a boon for students and businessmen. Survival in other countries will be convenient. Hence, the disappearance of certain languages seems to have a more positive impact on the world.
However, up to some extent, it is irrefutable fact that language diversity shows the richness of culture and tradition. Fewer languages mean less linguistic skills. These languages are the identity of some certain communities and tribes because languages are closely associated with the culture of individuals and the devastation of these vernacular languages will take a toll on diverse cultures.
To sum up, although, it seems to be necessary to save regional languages yet the declined barriers of languages will result in good psychological relationships among people.
14. Some people say that Government should break down all the historic buildings and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?
International English Language Testing System Writing Task 2, which is very important and contains a variety of questions. You need to write an essay on a topic. This is the question which you have to complete in between 250 to 280 words within only 40 minutes.
It is undeniable fact that every country’s monuments and historic sites are their heritage. Surprisingly, there are some who feel it is less valued and want the government to pull it down. In my opinion, these are the greatest assets of every country and deserve respectful attitudes by citizens.
To embark on, in the justification of my notion, every country has its own cultural history that exhibits old civilization. These historic sites are priceless and irreplaceable. This is the only way to appraise the next generation about our ancestors and their sacrifices. Moreover, visiting these locations will help us to learn from our ancestor’s lapses and provide a better course of action.
Furthermore, these locations are the best source of revenue income for the government. Tourists visit different places and their spending help the government to improve the infrastructure of the country. Moreover, tourists show their interest in purchasing handicrafts that result in the growth of a small-scale industry. It increases the flow of foreign money. Above all questions, it is quite apparent that tourists’ visit leads to good bonding among the people across the world.
In conclusion, I feel that preserving historical sites means saving the history of the country. It has Paramount importance because of its array of benefits for existing and forthcoming generations.
15. Many countries are experiencing population growth and need to build more homes. Some say that new homes should be constructed in existing cities while others argue that new towns should be built to accommodate the growing population. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these points of view?
Sample Band 8 Essay
In the past two decades, there has been an exponential increase in the migration of people to different cities and countries, indirectly resulting in considerable infrastructure development. However, there has been a long-standing debate on whether to direct these infrastructure projects to current cities or establish new counties. Careful consideration of both alternatives reveals that each has its positives and negatives.
One of the major advantages of focusing on current cities for new construction is that it would benefit the residents of the cities in multiple ways. Tenants living in Vancouver would prefer to buy a newly constructed house in the city where they work rather than in a new town, to reduce their commute time. Moreover, the city has everything they desire such as efficient public transport, a thriving job market, and affordable healthcare. This would not be possible in new towns because of the time it takes to establish services and generate opportunities for people.
On the other hand, accommodating people in houses built in newly created towns would put them in a pollution-free and clean environment. This is because new towns may take at least 10 years of time to become attractive spots for people and industries alike. As a result, their exposure to harmful emissions from industrial plants and transportation is reduced, shielding them from the risks of acquiring health complications. A recent report released by the word Health Organization (WHO) suggests that the number of people affected by airborne infections is 20% higher in cities compared to new towns that were formed just a couple of years ago.
In conclusion, while there are both positive and negative aspects to these views, the decision on where to build the new homes to accommodate the increasing population will depend on many other factors as well. Therefore, a thorough assessment is required before starting an infrastructure project.
Examiner’s comment: The writer discussed both sides of the argument and presented relevant examples. This essay has good structure, main ideas are organized well and conveyed coherently. The writer has a good range of vocabulary and has demonstrated strong knowledge of grammar. Overall, this is a very good essay and seems worthy of Band 8.
16. Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like, while others say that they should think more realistically about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sample Band 8 Essay
Choosing a future career requires careful consideration. While some people claim that adolescents should be able to pursue a career they would enjoy, others oppose that, arguing that teenagers should aim for a high-paying job in order to secure a livelihood when they grow up. Given that our life consists of more than just physiological needs, I strongly believe that it is vital to fulfilling one’s potential in the career fields that are most compatible with their interests.
The youth who choose highly skilled jobs may find it easier to have a fruitful future in a materialistic sense. It is true that some professions, such as engineers or doctors, are well paid and offer more stability compared to work in other, non-professional fields. For example, psychologists usually have higher starting salaries compared to artists; they also rarely lose their jobs in recessions. People who prioritize earning a living might agree that a reliable job is a must for their future and by no means will they take risks to gain employment in a field they are passionate about, that doesn’t pay well.
However, it is worth remembering that we are living in a rapidly changing world and the concept of a ‘guaranteed future’ is unrealistic. Even the smartest of us aren’t prophets and it is impossible to foresee many changes in job markets in the future; some high-salaried jobs of today may no longer exist by the time our young people become adults. Therefore, people may choose to pursue their dreams and follow career paths according to their passions and interests now, to avoid having regrets later in life.
Having considered the reasons to prefer monetary remuneration over one’s interests, I am convinced that it would be a pity for youths to limit their career choices to highly paid jobs of today. Unforeseen changes in the jobs markets may affect salaries but won’t change the pleasure one derives from doing something they love.
Examiner’s comment: The writer discussed both sides of the argument, expressed his/her opinion, and presented relevant arguments to support it. This essay has good structure, main ideas are organized well and conveyed coherently. The writer has a good range of vocabulary, and most sentences are free from grammatical errors. Overall, this is a very good essay and seems worthy of Band 8.
17. In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the Internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development?
Sample Band 8 Essay
The feasibility of shopping, working, and communicating through the Internet is gradually eliminating the necessity of in-person encounters. I believe the merits of this opportunity outnumber its demerits and the lowered volume of traffic in addition to the possibility of long-range communication will be discussed as reasons for this claim in this essay.
One chief benefit of using the Internet as a means of making purchases, working, and communicating would be the lowered demand for transport, through eradicating the need for face-to-face contact. Such decreased volume of transportation would result in fewer harmful gas emissions which could significantly contribute to creating a cleaner environment. Furthermore, reduced commuting burden yields more free time for individuals. It could be spent in various ways such as working, studying, and socializing with family and friends to name a few, which would be more productive and enjoyable.
Another key merit of using the Internet would be the emergence of state-of-the-art telecommunication applications. These technologies have made it possible for those with access to the Internet to get in touch and send and receive audiovisual content by pushing just a few buttons. This presents a stark contrast to the situation only a few decades ago when long-distance communication was possible solely through paper-based letters, which could possibly take months to reach the recipient.
There are, however, some drawbacks to online communication, in particular the possibility that the lack of contact brought by technological advancements could potentially weaken human bonds. Taking into consideration that humans are sociable species, this could pose a dire threat to our mental health. This predicament, however, would be mitigated by the extra free time technological developments create for us. This free time could be spent with friends and family and in the long run, would strengthen our relationships and improve our emotional wellbeing.
To recapitulate, the Internet’s demolishing the need for person-to-person contact brings about numerous benefits. A more sustainable environment as well as more free time generated for individuals, a reduced need to commute in addition to the feasibility of conducting long-distance communication in the easiest way possible, are all instances of the above-mentioned merits.
Examiner’s comment: The candidate displays a clear understanding of the task. The ideas are organized logically by following a clear progression in most parts. The range of vocabulary is wide and precise, and most sentences are free from grammatical errors. Overall, this is a very good essay and seems worthy of Band 8 or 8.5.
18. Some people believe that excessive use of modern technologies, such as computers and smartphones, is negatively affecting the reading and writing skills of our young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample Band 8 Essay
Parents and teachers in many countries are feeling increasingly concerned about the effect of digital devices on the vital skills of school-aged children. They are alarmed by the declining ability of young people to read and write and its suspected link to the influence of modern technology, and I wholeheartedly share their view. This essay will outline the reasons to watch out for the consequences of the widespread use of computers and mobile phones by our youngsters.
Primary school is a very important period when children develop their fine motor skills, which are involved in learning to write. Time spent typing on a mobile phone or a tablet doesn’t contribute to the necessary workout of the small muscles in the hands and fingers of young people. Not only do they get less practice in writing but also fewer opportunities to train in spelling words, since the ‘autocorrect’ and ‘autocomplete’ features use the first few letters to guess the entire word, therefore making it unnecessary for the child to remember and type it correctly. Another companion of unrestrained use of mobile devices is the jargon that is often used in text messages, where words are shortened or distorted. Exposure to ‘texting’ tends to replace the correct words with abbreviations in young minds, causing their spelling accuracy to decline.
Reading is another casualty of unrestricted access to smart devices. Video content can be more appealing and immersive for kids and they often are automatically drawn to it instead of books. Reading requires regular practice and needs to become a habit in order to fully develop as a skill; however, it is being perceived as a boring and laborious activity by many youngsters compared to effortless video-watching. Easy and instant access to videos and movies pushes books further down the list of preferences of the young audiences, and it takes a significant commitment from parents and teachers to ensure that children continue to read books.
To sum up, modern technology can be a friend or a foe for young children, depending on the choices adults in their lives make, regulating the amount of screen time and its purpose. Without due care, the writing and reading abilities of kids can be harmed by other, more enjoyable activities they can use the devices for.
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Possible Frequently Asked Questions about Learning English!
All the time, when an individual gets ready to learn the English language, he/she has so many questions and concerns even before the journey starts itself. In this way, I have listed out some limited questions that are usually in the minds of new learners as well as the parents also. We will see the different perceptions and thoughts of any person who starts learning English for their higher studies, jobs, and migration in afield zones.
1. Can Tamil medium students learn English effectively?
Of course, it is simply possible by the Tamil medium students. You will learn from many examples and spoken English Activities in Tamil in the beginning. Later, you will see many English lectures and explanations which make you speak fluently in a short span of time. You will exclusively be given additional care till you meet the standards. As a result, you will also equally compete with anyone in your workplace. You will become a great communicator among your colleagues, friends, and family members.
2. Can the average student explore the global language deeper?
Yes, even the semi-average students can effectively communicate in English with others with the help of proper guidance and support. Along with this, your involvement and interest in developing your soft skills will offer you fantastic results in your life.
3. Can we speak like a native speaker?
Of course, it's possible. A bit of effort will give you a major transformation. You can also speak similar to the natives.
4. Is the online mode of learning will be helpful and effective?
Nowadays, many learn from home. Even children can also take courses online, today. Undoubtedly, we receive the same quality of education as in schools.
5. How long will it take to learn English well?
Firstly, learning is a continuous process. We may not define this by the duration in hours/months as well. Instead, it is up to the ability, interest, involvement, and potential of the learners. We cannot classify the average or bright learning personality. Anyhow, it will probably take a minimum of two months to acquire the lingual skills. The amount of time we spend on educating ourselves, the amount of efficiency will improve the counterbalance to the efforts. It's entirely based on the needs that have arisen for us and the way of utilizing the opportunity wisely.
6. Is this course useful now?
Yes, undoubtedly. You are in any standards/years/designations. Acquiring a new skill is always a positive vibe that will mold your career and personal growth tremendously. In today's world, a person who can communicate conversations effectively will get more opportunities professionally.
7. What's the right time to start learning English?
It depends on the individual as a whole. I would anyhow suggest that you begin to learn your courses before two months minimum of your targeted time. To cite that I assume the learner will join the college in June, I would recommend him/her to pursue the course from April onwards. This is the right time because the expertness in the linguistic scenario will never be familiar in a short time. We need to use these skills regularly till we become master level. So, in short, it would be advised to begin your journey as possible.
To put it in a nutshell, everyone has some concerns before joining the courses. Anyhow, I would suggest you come forward, attend your first class, you personally experience how easy the English class will be for you. You see the changes in you as a wonderful transformation. Hearty Welcome always!!!
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Online Classes: A Detailed Analysis.
The view presented in this article is that Insight English Academy headquartered in the Green City Madurai since the early 2020s. We are located in the mid-city where a high educational facility around us. In the salad days of the Millennium, people seek an opportunity for cheap online education right from docile kids to adults and officials all over the world. All the historical universities and schools emergently evolve themselves to the digital roads and render their valuable services to their societies.
Firstly, we do fulfill the lingual needs of our students to be mastered from where they are. In this online world, right from school children to job-going Forbes, they are open to taking their language courses online, especially in video conferencing mode. Nowadays, they do participate more interestingly than in the traditional classroom setup. This innovative way of learning process gives them elucidative learning in detail as well as want to touch the deep sea. It is possible from both ends. The teacher-student coordination has been extraordinarily effectuated well in the online environment.
A great plus is that both the instructors and fellow students would learn the digital technology practices to equip themselves continuously. We can see a widespread helping tendency among the public has been spreading to be known from the unknown. They should be aware of the recent software and product updates in every technology needed for their academics.
Another thing to be considered is that today, a plethora of internetarians do spend their time on broadband and the wide web.
Most of their time is spent knowing something new every day with their recently updated handy gadgets, especially at their convenient time. To exemplify this, many of us read our study materials and dailies on web pages, PDF files, and other forms of soft copies. The young society is well-familiarized with surfing the internet. They become fast and smart learners of the present digitalized era.
Shifting towards further opine, a face-to-face meeting employing software applications is more common these days. A teachership is being upgraded from in-person to virtual presence. This is a godsend for us. We would use this ample opportunity wisely.
As I end this article, all the above-discussed assertions lead me to the conclusion. Online Education at an affordable cost is a salient feature of every pupil we know. It is essential to utilize it as a whole. I would like to pen down a famous Chinese saying that "A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step." - Lao Tzu. As per this saying, I would suggest you start up your efforts towards learning the global-ruling language. Every opportunity that comes in your way does spark a flame on the starting line to educate yourself. You wish to become an expert user of the same without considering either classroom education or online education. Our Insight English Academy is open to assist in any way you prefer. You will feel pride after taking language courses with us. Insight heartily welcomes you with an open door always.
Insight English Academy, Madurai - A Statistical Approach!
Insight would like to share a please delightful thing to the universe is that our students go to many regions where dissimilar cultural people live.
To commence with the first notion, they find super acme universities and colleges for their higher studies. They pursue their two-year courses, get a job and ensconce themselves over there itself. I can say a plethora of people come across these life-changing moments in their lives. Many people visit afield countries for their studies. I can hear many success stories after completing their courses at Insight English Academy. They do keep in touch with me after been at their universities.
The second area to consider is that there is a stable interest and willingness to reach high profile countries like the USA, Canada, and the UK among the youth from many decades before itself. The same trend continues even now. I am sure that this will carry over in society for the upcoming centuries also. In short, it was, it will be.
Hammering the last nail, I personally feel that Insight English Academy supports many many years to limitless educatees' community in future. We would be grateful to all of you.
Insight English Academy, Madurai - Sterling Online Spoken English Learning!
Hello Aspirants, hope this is the best time to start your test preparation. Insight English Academy is the nearest best place for you. I would heartily invite you to begin your journey with us. You can get classes at your convenience. We allocate plenty of time for each module. In addendum to this, we facilitate the sterling classes online and in person. Notably, Home Tuition indoctrination is provided at your flexible timings. Many academicians have been entering the super acme universities all over the world. All the very best wishes to score your expected bands. Hearty Welcome!
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Insight English Academy, Madurai - A monopolistic player of Virtual Learning Environment!
At Insight English Academy Madurai, I indoctrinate functional English language for School and College Students, Employees, Doctors, Nurses, Home-makers who want to learn Basic Communication Course, Advanced Grammar Course, Fluency, Phonemics, IELTS, PTE, TOEFL, OET, SAT, GRE, Life Skills, Mathematics, SEO Services, Resume Building, Thesis Writing, and Basic Computer Courses. Notably, Home Tuition indoctrination is provided at your flexible timings. The main advantage is giving you closer attention with the help of one-on-one sessions. The faculty will be engaged with only one student at the moment. Your learning is entirely result-oriented with a better understanding of the lessons ever.
Newly, The Occupational English Test OET course is being conducted here with your great support. This program is for all healthcare professionals. Especially, the Nurses, Doctors, Dentists, Pharmacists, Radiographists, Physiotherapists, Dietetics, Occupational Therapists, Optometrists, Podiatrists, Speech Pathologists, and finally Veterinarians. All of these professionals can take part in this test to work abroad. This is one of the language proficiency tests to enrich your language skills which will meet out the demands of your workplace. Classes will be handled through online sessions at your convenience.
In addendum to this, some of the new courses have been newly introduced for the school pupils. These are as follows: Conversations, SEO Services, Resume Building, Thesis Writing, and Basic Computer Course. In light of the children, they will become highly skillful in their younger ages itself. The parents will be pleased to see their kids once they communicate in the global language as well as using the new technological gadgets efficiently even without the close supervision of the adults. Insight ensures that these are the inevitable skillsets that every kid should have in them to face today's challenging environment. This leads them to live a lavish lifestyle in their younger ages as well.
Nowadays, Insight feels happy and proud by providing sterling online classes even for abroad students. Many academicians have been entering the super acme universities all over the world. Thank You!!
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